Downloaded to hell
A Short Story
by Mark Lukens
Copyright © 2016 by Mark Lukens
My name is Adam Romberg and
I sent a man to Hell.
You may have heard of me—a
tech geek who started a software company in his dorm room. You probably don’t
know much about my software or how it works; all you probably know about me is
that I was a billionaire by the age of twenty-four. Most might say I have led a
charmed life. I met the woman of my dreams not too long after my company IPO’d
and a year and a half later we had a baby girl together. Yes, it was a charmed
life … a blessed life. And then four years after my daughter was born, six
months ago now, it was all taken away from me.
I was gone from the house a
lot by then, flying around the world and attending meetings. When my wife told
me that she thought someone was stalking her I didn’t pay much attention to it.
We had the best security system in our house that money could buy. I even joked
that I could hire a bodyguard for her if it would make her feel better. She
told me not to be silly.
Two months after that
conversation the man who had been stalking her, a man named Darren Lee Hodges,
gunned my wife and daughter down while they were shopping. Darren Hodges was
never caught, never even identified by the police … a big mystery on the news.
But I found him three months ago—it’s amazing what kind of information ten
million dollars will buy. I instructed my three-man team to catch Darren
Hodges; I didn’t want him hurt or killed. I wanted him brought to this
warehouse I had rented and then buried under a paper trail of shell
corporations that could never be traced back to me.
Everything was set up in
the warehouse now for the procedure: the hospital bed, the restraints, the
computer equipment, the surgical equipment. My men brought an unconscious
Darren Lee Hodges in and transferred him to the hospital bed and strapped him
down. It cost me five hundred thousand dollars for these men to abduct Darren
and deliver him here, but I didn’t care what the cost was … I would’ve paid
even more. The thought of revenge for what this man had done to my family
consumed me: I couldn’t work, couldn’t eat, couldn’t think straight. I needed
to do this; I needed to put this behind me so I could find some kind of way to
move on.
An hour later Darren was
awake and clearly agitated. He struggled against the leather cuffs and straps
for a while but there was no hope of escape for him. I let him struggle and
scream for thirty minutes and then I walked from the shadows to stand beside
his bed.
When he saw my face he
understood why he was here. He stared at me with hatred, a defiant expression
that showed me he was going to be able to handle anything I planned to do to
him.
The surgical team assembled
behind me, all of them prepped and ready to go. Darren’s eyes widened with
surprise when he saw them. Maybe he had expected to be tortured, but seeing the
surgeons was an obvious surprise to him. I gestured to the team to wait a
moment—I had a question for Darren that I wanted answered. “I want to know why
you killed my wife and daughter.”
Darren stared at me as I
stood next to his bed and after a moment I knew he wasn’t going to answer my
question—his final infliction of pain would be to deny me the reasons for his
actions.
I sighed and turned to the
surgical team. I nodded at them and they went to work, pushing a gigantic
computer on top of a metal cart behind him, moving it into position.
“What are they doing?”
Darren asked. He turned his head as far as he could to watch them, and then he
looked at me.
I felt a sudden mean
streak. I wanted to deny him information like he was denying it to me. He
waited for my answer. Darren Lee Hodges was a killer, but he wasn’t a stupid
man. The police hadn’t caught him for his crimes because he hadn’t left any
evidence behind (well, not much anyway, but just enough for my men to find
him). No, he wasn’t a stupid man and he knew he wasn’t going to get an answer
to his question until I got an answer to mine.
“I hated you,” Darren
finally said as the surgeons and technicians worked behind him. “I hated you
and every other billionaire out there. You one percenters live in opulence
while the rest of us struggle. You make more and more obscene amounts of money
while more and more is taken from us.”
“I give away a lot of
money.”
“Yeah, right. I know how
the game works. Money is funneled through fake charities that are more like
slush funds and money laundering schemes. You wash hands and scratch backs while
the same is done to you, and the money and power stays at the top with the
elites. But your days are numbered, I’ll tell you that. This is only the first
warning to share your wealth or face the consequences.”
Darren stopped talking. He
seemed smug, satisfied that his message had been delivered. I imagined that he
would’ve eventually turned himself in for the murder of my wife and daughter
just so he could bask in his new-found fame.
“I wanted to hurt you,”
Darren told me in a low voice. That look of satisfaction was still on his face.
He looked like a man who could die in peace now.
“You did,” I told him.
“And now you’re going to
hurt me, is that it?”
I shrugged. “Yes. But the
operation these surgeons are going to perform will be painless. An anesthetic
will be used.”
Darren didn’t say
anything—just watching me.
“No one knows you’re here,”
I told him. “No one knows that I found you. No one will ever know what you did
to my wife and daughter. You will never be remembered.”
He tried to hide his horror
but he couldn’t.
“I had new software
developed,” I told him. “It’s cutting edge stuff; a brain/computer sync. There
will be many uses for it in the future, but I had my developers create this
particular software just for you. It’s a version of Hell thought up by the best
horror writers and game designers I could hire.”
Darren didn’t seem like he
understood exactly what I was saying. Maybe that was my fault; maybe I wasn’t
being clear enough.
The head surgeon directed
his team into place as two technicians attached the wires to the computers.
These wires would be inserted into Darren’s brain soon.
“Your consciousness,” I
told him, “your mind … you, essentially … will be downloaded into this software
program where you will live on and on. Once you’re in the program you will wake
up in a world that is truly a hell. You will never have a moment’s peace as you
run and run from horror after horror. You will be aware of everything at every
moment with no possible hope of escape. And from now on, that world will be the
only world you will ever know.”
A nurse placed an oxygen
mask over Darren’s mouth and nose before he could scream. He was already
hyperventilating, his eyes wide as he stared up at me. I would be the last
thing he ever saw before he woke up in that world …
*
Darren woke up in Hell.
He stood up in a dark
hallway made of stone. The ceiling arched two stories above him in the
darkness. Torches lined the walls, the flickering firelight creating shadows
that danced at the edges of the light. The air was cold and damp … he could
feel it on his skin.
Darren looked down at his
body. He wore the same clothes that he’d had on in the hospital bed. He
realized that everything Adam Romberg had told him was true. He was here … he
was trapped in this software now, in this hell.
“No,” he whispered. “This
can’t be real. This has to be some kind of … some kind of dream.”
Something growled from the
darkness down the hall … some kind of beast.
Darren turned and ran the
other way down the hall until it led to another hallway, and then more halls.
It seemed like this place was an old castle, but it was more like a maze.
Screams drifted from down the hall to the right … so he went left.
He ran blindly, passing
rooms with open doors. He stopped in one doorway and saw a man pulling organs
out of a person strapped down to a chair. The man was dressed in a
blood-stained surgical gown, rubber gloves, and a cloth mask that was
splattered with bright red blood. His eyes were wide and insane above the mask,
and he was suddenly curious at this passerby out in the hall. He held a pair of
large pliers in one hand and a scalpel in the other.
The surgeon started coming
Darren’s way.
Darren ran farther down the
hall, looking back over his shoulder. The surgeon was impossibly fast, catching
up so quickly. Darren turned back around and collided with a huge masked man
who seemed like something right out of a slasher film. The monster of a man
held an ax, swinging it up high. He brought the ax down right on Darren’s
shoulder, knocking him down to the stone floor. Darren screamed. He could feel
the pain, his bones separating, his arm useless now. The pain was so intense …
he could think of nothing else as he curled up into a ball. The last thing he
saw was the man swinging the ax down towards his face …
… and then Darren woke up strapped to a wood
chair. He was alive again, awake and in pain. The masked surgeon moved into his
field of vision, holding the pliers and the scalpel. Darren screamed as the
surgeon cut away his clothes …
*
Four hours later the brain
surgery was a success. Darren’s consciousness had been downloaded onto the
software program and he had already spent an hour in his new world now—a world
of torture and horror that would go on forever.
Darren’s body was still
alive for the moment—machines kept his lungs and heart working—but he was
essentially braindead now as he lay on the hospital bed. I had a team of men
coming to dispose of his body. Another two hundred thousand dollars would make sure
his remains would never be found.
I walked over to a desktop
computer and sat down. I logged on and sat there for a moment just staring at
the screen. I thought I heard a sound from my computer; the sound was so low I
almost didn’t think it was real for a moment. But then I heard it again and I
smiled … it was a scream.
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AUTHOR BIO
Mark Lukens has been writing since the
second grade when his teacher called his parents in for a conference because
the ghost story he'd written had her a little concerned.
Since then he's had several stories published and four screenplays optioned by producers in Hollywood. One script is in development to be produced. He is the author of many bestselling books including: Ancient Enemy, Descendants of Magic, The Summoning, Night Terrors, Sightings, The Exorcist's Apprentice, What Lies Below, Devil's Island, The Darwin Effect, Ghost Town: a novella, and A Dark Collection: 12 Scary Stories. He is a member of The Horror Writers Association.
He grew up in Daytona Beach, Florida. But after many travels and adventures, he settled down in Tampa, Florida with his wonderful wife and son ... and a stray cat they adopted.
He loves to hear from readers! He can be found on Facebook at Mark Lukens Books, on Twitter at @marklukensbooks, and you can follow his blog at www.marklukensbooks.wordpress.com. He can be reached by e-mail at marklukensbooks@yahoo.com.
Since then he's had several stories published and four screenplays optioned by producers in Hollywood. One script is in development to be produced. He is the author of many bestselling books including: Ancient Enemy, Descendants of Magic, The Summoning, Night Terrors, Sightings, The Exorcist's Apprentice, What Lies Below, Devil's Island, The Darwin Effect, Ghost Town: a novella, and A Dark Collection: 12 Scary Stories. He is a member of The Horror Writers Association.
He grew up in Daytona Beach, Florida. But after many travels and adventures, he settled down in Tampa, Florida with his wonderful wife and son ... and a stray cat they adopted.
He loves to hear from readers! He can be found on Facebook at Mark Lukens Books, on Twitter at @marklukensbooks, and you can follow his blog at www.marklukensbooks.wordpress.com. He can be reached by e-mail at marklukensbooks@yahoo.com.
Great story, Mark. Love the concept. It would make a fabulous movie!
ReplyDeleteWow, it would make a great movie!!! Anybody listening? Or TV series ... Yeah!!!
DeleteFantastic! I really enjoyed your story, Mark! 5 stars!
ReplyDeleteI agree Mark, a great movie or even a book.
ReplyDeleteFabulous Mark. Well done.
ReplyDeleteFabulous Mark. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThis is great
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