LUCY KNOWS
BY w.
pOTOCKI
Copyright ©
2016 W. Potocki
The
three-hour drive to Bedford, Vermont had been worth it. The ski lodge her
boyfriend selected for the weekend getaway was perfect.
“You
did good, Stevie,” she praised before dropping her bags and delivering a kiss.
“Hey, you two—get a room,” Riley joked as he swaggered
into the rental. He dispensed with his luggage and ski equipment and glanced around.
“Not bad, but we need a fire.”
“Good
idea,” his girlfriend Pam said, closing the door behind her and shutting out
the cold. As she unzipped her parka, she gazed out the window at the picturesque
view. “Don’t know how you came up with this place, Steve, but it sure is purdy.”
“It’s got
everything the well-known resorts have at half the price,” he replied.
“Good
thinking, my man,” Riley responded. “What’s the plan for tonight?”
“Well,
it’s about 5:30, so what say we have some supper before heading into town and
throwing back a few? Tomorrow, we hit the slopes early.”
Steve returned
Riley’s approving high-five, but Angie’s voice interrupted the bromance from
developing any further.
“Need
to talk to you.”
Irritation
was apparent in her tone. She got that way when pissed, but then she’d been
bitchy all during the ride up—not that her boyfriend had noticed—much.
“Shoot,”
Steve responded.
“I
mean privately. Where’s our room?”
“That-a-way,”
he indicated. Riley snickered as Angie hauled Steve out of the parlor and into
the bedroom.
“Hey,
what gives?” her boyfriend asked.
“The
couple in the living room, that’s what!” she snapped.
“Riley
and Pam?”
“Yes!
It’s not that I don’t appreciate you bringing me up here, but why the hell did
you invite them along? When you mentioned the trip, I thought it was going to
be just us—as in you and me.”
“It helps
with expenses. Besides, I thought you and Pam were friends.”
“We
are, but haven’t you heard two’s company and four dampens sex? You know, that
thing we haven’t done in a while?”
“We
can hear you!”
Riley’s
voice came through loud and clear. Angie was embarrassed but not enough to stop
venting her frustration. Steve was the man she wanted to marry, but she barely saw
him these days.
“Guess
you should have done this,” Steve whispered as he closed the door.
Her
lips eased back in a sheepish grin. Snatching him by the front of his sweater,
she indulged in a long, sticky kiss that sent a tingle up the inside of both her
thighs. She leaned her head back and gazed up into those blue eyes that drove
her crazy. “And that itinerary you provided? You left something out, you
doo-doo head.”
“Really?
What did I miss?” he asked as he rubbed his hands over her hips.
“It’s
sex before dinner,” she purred as she pushed her lover boy on the bed and pretended
the couple in the other room didn’t exist.
* * *
Steve’s
black SUV made its way through the center of town. Everything pointed to this
ski resort attracting loads of tourists, and yet the streets were practically
empty, but it was their loss, and Angie and her friends’ gain.
“Anything
looking good to you?” Steve asked the trio scouting for a bar to make their own.
“How
about that one?” Riley suggested.
“Looks
like a dump,” Pam dismissed. “But the place next to it looks kinda nice.”
“Yeah,
it does,” Angie said, mulling the selection over. “Wait! What’s that one over
there?”
“The
one with the red neon sign?” Pam queried.
“Yup,”
Angie replied.
“Lucy’s,”
Riley read aloud. “What’s that thing under the name supposed to be?”
Steve
chanced a few glances to his left.
“Looks
like a bleeding heart,” he remarked.
“That’s
what it is. A goddamned giant bleeding heart! I say we go there!” Angie insisted.
“Yeah,
you’re into that horror shit,” Riley grumbled. “Lucky the Bates Motel isn’t an
option.”
“On
that note, and if there are no objections,” Steve replied as he popped on the
blinker, “Lucy’s it is!”
* * *
“Boston Lager all around,” Steve ordered as
the four took seats at the bar. The fortyish man behind the counter fulfilled
the request.
“So
what do we think?” Steve asked as he gave the place the onceover.
“Think
it looks better inside than out,” Riley answered. “With the name Lucy’s, I
thought it’d be a frou-frou pick-up joint, but it’s hardcore classic.”
“Yup,
and that includes the customers,” Pam agreed. “I’ll bet that guy slumped over
the counter has been nursing the same whiskey for about ten years.”
“Yeah,
and I’ll bet he tells the bartender the same bullshit sob story about how he never
could keep a job, and how it was all the job’s fault and not his,” Steve joked.
The
four laughed, but Angie’s attention was pulled away by something much more intriguing.
“What’s
that?” she asked.
“A
table and two chairs,” Steve answered as he palmed a handful of pretzels.
“Yeah,
but one of those chairs is a rocker.”
“So?” Shrugging,
he munched away.
“And you
don’t find it odd?” she continued, not letting up.
“Nope,”
he replied.
“I do,”
Pam interjected. “Angie’s right. Having a rocking chair in a bar is weird. And
why the rope sectioning the whole thing off?”
“Maybe
it’s for people that don’t want to be bothered,” Riley surmised. Both women rolled
their eyes.
“That
makes no sense at all,” Angie retorted.
“Maybe
the rocker is broken.”
It was
Steve this time. Angie shoved his arm, letting him know what she thought of his
analysis.
“It
ain’t broke.”
The
deep voice got their attention; the bartender’s timing was excellent.
“No?
Then why the rope?” Steve probed.
“Because one of those is Lucy’s chair.”
“Lucy?”
Angie queried.
“Slopers,
huh?” the man asked accusingly.
The
four shrugged. More of an explanation was needed for the remark.
“Slopers is our word for skiers. We only
get two kinds of tourists in Bedford: those that ski and those that come to see
Lucy. Course, it’s Lucy that keeps most slopers away.”
The
cryptic message rattled around in Angie’s head; she had no idea what the hell he
was talking about.
“Allow
me to introduce myself,” he said, brushing away the puzzled looks. “I’m Frank
Holmstrom, the owner of this establishment. And you are?” he asked as he
extended his hand.
“Steve
Kent. This is my girlfriend Angie Taft, and that’s Riley Griffith and Pam Davis.
And I’m guessing Lucy is your wife?”
“Nope,
but she is close to my heart. I bought this place because I feel a special
allegiance in keepin’ the Legend of Lucy Knows alive. You see, this used to be her
home.”
“Lucy Knows?” Steve repeated. “That was
her name?”
“Yup. Lucy
Carmindy Knows. Born in Bedford on December 5, 1879. She was a sweet, quiet child
who never gave her parents a lick of trouble, but all that changed at the age of fourteen
when Tobias and Katherine’s only offspring showed signs of possessing a sixth
sense. But it wasn’t your average intuition, and it caused her folks a heap of
embarrassment. “
“Why?”
Angie asked.
“Because
her talent was sensing whether couples were cheating on one another. You can
imagine the kind of fuss kicked up when the family was out at a social function,
and their daughter would tell a spouse that her husband was having an affair
with the maid—and be right.
“The
name Lucy Knows took on a meaning all
its own. ‘Lucy Knows,’ people would whisper
to those doubting a partner’s fidelity, and before Lucy reached her sixteenth birthday,
people were lining up at her door to find out whether their suspicions were
true.
“Lucy
helped as many as she could and always charged the same: one shiny copper penny
that the customers would drop in the jar she kept on her table. That jar and that table right over there,” Frank said, indicating the roped off
area.
“You
mean, those things were hers?” Pam asked.
“Not
were—are. After she died, no one
wanted anything to do them. They believed them to be cursed.”
“Cursed? Because she told people what they
wanted to hear?” Steve interjected.
“No,
because of the murders,” came the unexpected reply.
Snow
and frigid air blew in the open door. A regular came in at an inopportune time
but quickly read the signs of what was going on. The bar had gone unnaturally
still, and it could only mean one thing. With a nod to Frank, he took off his
hat and seated himself at an empty table.
“Tell
us about the murders … please,” Angie pressed. She shifted her weight and
started playing with her shoulder-length brown hair.
“The
murders, huh? Well, as you can imagine, her fame spread beyond the town’s
borders. Lucy had just turned eighteen when a well-to-do woman traveled all the
way from New York City to speak with her. Veronica Larchmont was engaged to
Prescott Ames, the most eligible bachelor in the country, but his good looks
and money weren’t enough. She wanted a man she could trust and she wasn’t sure
she could trust Scotto. So she came to Bedford and consulted with Lucy, who confirmed
her worst fears.
“The
minute Veronica returned to New York, she canceled the wedding and returned the
ten-carat engagement ring. Prescott was furious when he learned the reason why.
He swore that what Lucy said was a lie, but Veronica wouldn’t listen. ‘Lucy Knows,’ she kept repeating. Out of
his mind with grief, he promised that Miss Lucy Knows would regret what she’d
done.
“A
scurrilous whispering campaign to impugn Lucy Know’s integrity was begun, one
that accused her of consorting with demons and The Devil himself. It was meant
to ruin her, but Lucy vowed that she would never let anyone or anything stop
her from speaking the truth. Luckily, the people of Bedford refused to fall for
the scheme. Lucy Knows had helped too many for them to turn their backs on her
in her time of need.
“When
the plot failed, a more sinister tactic was tried. To everyone’s horror, Miss Lucy
Knows was found savagely beaten and stabbed to death in her own bed. An intruder
had come in through an open window. Everyone suspected Prescott Ames, but with
no clues, there were no arrests. Scotto got off scot-free.
“The
girl that caused Prescott Ames problems was dead and he was exuberant, but not
for long. Within the month, he was also found dead—in his townhouse, with his chest
ripped open and his heart removed. Rumor had it that it was still beating when
the police arrived.
“The strange
thing is that the night Prescott died, Lucy’s parents swore they saw their
daughter’s rocking chair move. It was enough to revive the rumor that Prescott started.
Soon gossip was passed that Lucy had consorted with demons, and it was through
those devils that she was brought back to life to seek revenge on the
unfaithful. The story took hold when other men and women were found murdered in
an identical fashion to Preston Ames. The curious thing was that they were all
cheaters—ones that Lucy had warned her clients about.”
Frank leaned
back as he and the patrons of the bar waited for a reaction. After exchanging
glances with his friends, Steve gave them one. He started to laugh.
“You’ve
gotta be kiddin’ me! I mean, it’s a great story, but do you actually think any
of us is going to believe that nonsense?”
“Nonsense?”
a soused redhead sitting at an adjacent table yelled out. “If you doubt the
truth, you can try it yourselves,” she dared.
“Wait
a minute! That’s why you have those things in the bar? To find out if partners
are cheating?” Steve asked.
“Now
you’re catching on,” Frank replied.
“I don’t
want any part of this,” Pam said as she latched hold of Riley’s arm.
“Too
chicken?” the redhead taunted. “I did it last month to see if this asshole was
cheating on me,” she said, pointing at the bearded man sitting next to her. “I
walked over and said, ‘Lucy, please tell me if my boyfriend Hank has been
messing around with his skanky ex.’ It wasn’t but a second later the rocker
started moving. Lucky for him, he wasn’t drilling for oil in somebody else’s
well.”
“But how
do you know?” Riley queried.
“He’s
alive, ain’t he?”
Raucous
laughter and several hoots erupted. It broke the tension and instilled a
confidence in Angie.
“I’ll
try it,” she announced. She had her doubts and was in the mood to put her
boyfriend’s fidelity to the test. “If it’s all right with you, baby,” she
remarked to Steve.
“Go
for it,” he replied, giving her a slap on the butt to get her going.
“You
coming?” she asked Pam. “You’ve got a boyfriend too, you know.”
Even
with the crowd egging her on, Pam shook her head.
“Aw
come on!” Angie begged.
“Fine,”
her friend relented.
“Awesome!
I’ll go first,” Angie said as she unhooked the rope and sat down. Digging out a
penny from her pocket, she placed it in the jar. “Miss Lucy Knows,” she said,
staring straight ahead at the empty rocker. “Please tell me if my boyfriend
Steve’s been faithful. He’s been clocking a lot of hours lately, and I’d hate
to think he wasn’t at work.”
A loud
“uh oh!” came from somewhere in the crowd. Riley swung his arm over his buddy’s
shoulders and waited. With a loud creak, the chair lurched forward and started
to move.
“No
way,” Angie whispered.
“Somebody’s
pulling a string,” Steve accused.
“Nope,
no string, son,” Frank replied. “It’s Lucy.”
The rocking
only lasted a few seconds, but it was all it took.
“God,
that was creepy!” Angie yelled as she sprang up. “Your turn.”
Pam’s
head dropped as she made his way to the vacated chair. It didn’t take a genius
to figure out she was as nervous as hell.
“Lucy
Knows,” she started. “Is Riley cheating on me?”
With a
loud creak, the chair began rocking.
Pamela
brushed her wheat-colored hair away from her face as her eyes blinked in rapid
succession. The tanned skin paled as her body began to violently shake. With a
chilling scream, she began puking all over the floor.
* * *
“You really believe something she ate this
morning was responsible for her vomiting?”
Angie
started in on Steve and Riley the minute they made it back to the lodge. Pam stayed
out of the discussion by retiring to bed to recuperate.
“Yeah,
sure. Why not?” Steve responded.
“Because
it makes no sense,” she insisted.
“I
think it does. What about you, Riley? Yeah or nay?”
“I
agree with Steve. I told her not to eat those tacos, but there she
went—scarfing ‘em down like there was no tomorrow.”
Angie’s
abject disgust at the two yutzes standing before her was showing.
“You’re
making that cat noise, Angie,” Steve reprimanded.
“What
cat noise?”
“You
know, the one you make when you tighten your lips and hiss air between your teeth.”
He demonstrated until she held up her hand.
“Whatever,
dude. I’m taking a shower and hitting the sheets.”
“Sounds
good to me. I’ll be right up, and when I get there, maybe you can explain why
you think this was Lucy’s fault.”
“I
never said that!” she argued as Riley chuckled at his cohort’s assertion.
“You
didn’t have to,” Steve continued, addressing his comments to his audience of
one. “First, she doesn’t believe the urban legend. But now, because Pam paid
the price for eating bad tacos, she’s ready to believe a ghost that stalks
cheaters and removes their hearts is making someone sick. I mean, that wasn’t
even part of the goddamned story!”
The
laughter increased; Angie had had enough. If these two clowns didn’t understand
that there was something weird about Pam getting violently ill, no amount of
explaining would help. She hurried away as Riley sidled up to his friend and
whispered, “She’ll get over it.”
“She
has to,” Steve replied in a tone loud enough for her to hear. “It’s my car
that’s bringing her home.”
* * *
The
mattress was comfortable, but Angie had already tested it out with the session
of impromptu lovemaking. She would have liked a part deux, but was too upset with
her partner to consider it. Not one to hold back, she let him know how much she
resented him making fun of her, but her words had no effect. He was soon asleep,
but it wasn’t that easy for her. The heated argument was still swirling in her
head—as was the story of Lucy.
Steve
could joke all he wanted; there was something not right about the Legend of Miss
Lucy Knows.
Muffled
sounds from down the hall trickled under the door of the room. She put it down
to imagining things, but the rustling didn’t stop. With Steve sound asleep, she
slipped out of bed and into a robe, pulling on a pair of socks to ward off the
chilliness of the floors. She padded down the dark corridor. A light was on in
the kitchen. It was Pam.
“I
thought I heard something.”
“Sorry.
Thought some tea would settle my stomach,” Pam responded. “Water’s still hot.”
“Sounds
good,” Angie replied. She covered the tea bag with water and let it steep while
she settled next to Pam. “You feeling any better?”
“A
little. Still weak, though.”
Angie patted
Pam’s arm.
“Do
you believe it was something you ate?”
“Don’t
know what you mean,” the willowy blonde answered. She took another sip of tea.
“Don’t
you?” Angie pressured. “You saw that rocking chair move. Do you think it was a
trick?”
“Of
course,” she exhaled. “What else would it be?”
“I
don’t know,” Angie replied. “Thought maybe you could tell me.”
“Tell
you what?” Pam’s blue eyes looked everywhere except at Angie.
“Nothing.
Nothing at all,” she quipped, letting the subject drop. Picking up her mug, Angie
saluted as she returned to bed leaving Pam alone.
* * *
Pam
breathed a sigh of relief.
Even
though she was sure she and Steve had been careful, she was uneasy being around
her old friend. She could swear Angie had found out about the affair, but it
was only a guilty conscience making her think that way. Besides, Stevie was
worth the risk.
“Lucy Knows.”
“What?”
Pam responded to the raspy whisper that seemed to come from everywhere.
The
sound of footsteps in the parlor coupled with the door opening and closing
pried her loose from her seat.
“Angie?”
she called out as she walked into the living room and checked the front hall.
Rubbing her arms only partially staved off the cold air that had gotten in. She
ran to the window and pulled back a curtain, only catching a glimpse of the
girl that could only be Angie rounding the corner and heading to the back. She
pulled on a pair of boots and zipped up her parka over her nightgown. Wrapping
a scarf around her neck, she dashed through the house and went out through the
kitchen.
Once
outside, a light popped on in the old shed behind the main house.
“What
the hell is she doing?” she murmured as she set off across the snow-covered
lawn.
* * *
The
sunlight on Angie’s eyelids turned black to red. The tea had done the trick.
She’d fallen asleep right after drinking it. She awoke slowly, the anger she
felt at Steve gone with the new day.
They were even.
She
left it at that as she rolled over and fit against him.
An
uncomfortable sensation of wetness soaked her nightgown and crept its way onto
her skin. Her eyes snapped open.
“Noooooooooooo!”
she screamed as red jazz hands flailed in the air.
Steve
was dead. Cut down the middle to his waist, his heart lay on the dresser,
beating and warm. The knife used to slice him open was next to it. She screamed
again; panic removing all thoughts except the compulsion to get away.
She raced
into the hallway, almost colliding with Riley. She tried rushing into his arms
for comfort, but he staggered back at the sight of her covered in blood.
“What
the hell, Angie? What’s going on?”
“Steve … he’s dead!” she cried hysterically. She
ran her hand through her hair, matting it with red.
Riley checked
to see if what she said were true. A second later, he emerged from the site of
the slaughter, gasping for breath and fighting back vomit. “You killed him,
Angie? Because you thought he was screwing Pam? That’s what you told me, Angie.
That you thought they were hooking up.”
“Yes …
I mean no! Yes, I said that, but, no, I didn’t kill him! Are you crazy thinking
I’d do something like that?”
“Me
crazy?” he retorted. “I’m not the one covered in blood and holding a knife.”
The knife.
She
forgot it was in her hand. It was stupid picking it up. Releasing her grip, it clattered
to the floor.
“I’m
calling the police,” he threatened as he pivoted.
“You
can’t!” she yelled as she tried to snatch hold of his arm. He pulled away just
in time to avoid her touch.
“You
keep the hell away from me. You took it too far,” he said, backing up. He
needed that phone.
“I
didn’t do anything. It was Lucy. She knew Steve was cheating.”
“Really?
And Lucy killed Pam, too?”
“Pam?”
she repeated.
“Yeah,
she wasn’t in bed this morning, so I took a look around and found her by the
shed.”
“She’s
dead?”
“Can’t
live without a heart, Angie, but then you know that.”
“No!”
she gasped.
“Yes! And
if it wasn’t me responsible, then that leaves you.”
She
collapsed on the scatter rug, breaking down into tears. Riley seized the
opportunity and sprinted to his bedroom, locking the door behind him, but it
didn’t matter where he went. The reality was that Lucy would track him down and
wouldn’t stop there. It’s why Angie was so nervous.
The
knife was missing from the spot it landed and it didn’t take long for a series
of gut-wrenching screams to pollute the air before everything went dead.
The
vague outline of a woman seeped through the locked door and drifted down the
hall, the bloody knife that butchered Angie’s friends gripped in a transparent
hand.
“Lucy,
please!” she begged. “I’m sorry! Can’t you see I’m sorry?”
Yes,
she’d slept with Riley, but she only meant to pay Steve back for screwing her
best friend. Just silly payback to even the score.
A
gleam of silver blurred as it swept in front of her eyes and landed in her
chest. A burst of red sprayed into the air as she shrieked out in pain. The
awful sound of ripping flesh and bone rang out as vacant eyes stared up into a
demon’s face, and Angie’s cowered spirit repented of sin for the very last time.
“Lucy Knows,” the demon mumbled as she
dug in her hands and ripped open Angie’s chest, taking out the beating heart.
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